Thursday, October 23, 2008

Thoughts about my essay draft...

I just wrote my draft for tomorrow's workshop, and I really had a hard time finishing it.  I intended for this essay to be a personal and narrative essay about my experience at BHS.  I wanted to discuss the changing dynamic in the three classrooms I was studying.  However, after I told my story, I felt like there was nothing to say.  I didn't want to make the transition from a first hand narrative to an informational conclusion, but that's where I felt my essay was headed.  I ended up not really ending the essay, and I'm hoping to get some feedback before I find a better direction for my writing.

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